Rhetorical Analysis
Prewriting Sheet
Directions: After reading through the essay guidelines, use this sheet to plan out your rhetorical analysis essay. Be sure to fill in all parts and proofread and spell/grammar check your work before submitting.
Part I: SOAPSTone- use the acronym to break down the essay prompt. This will provide clarity for what you will be writing about.
S- Abraham Lincoln, the 16th President of the United States, during the American Civil War.
O- The National Cemetery at Gettysburg, Pennsylvania, on November 19, 1863
A- All Americans
P- Honor the fallen soldiers and remind Americans equality, freedom, democracy.
S- Speech of the Civil War, reflects on the meaning of sacrifice and freedom.
Tone- reverent, formal
Part II: Source and Areas of Focus- choose your source and the points of emphasis you will elaborate on throughout the essay.
Source
Abraham Lincoln's Gettysburg Address
Appeal
pathos
Style
repetition
Device
anaphora, antithesis
Part III: Thesis Statement- this is the most important part of your essay. Without an adequate thesis statement, you do not have an essay. This must include the topic, your stance, and (if you choose) the three areas of focus you will elaborate on throughout your essay.
Lincoln's Gettysburg Address effectively uses Pathos appeals to convey a solemn message to reacquaint Americans with the principles of equality and democracy that were the basis of America's founding, in honor of the sacrifices made, and for the sake of America. Hopefully, Americans now fight for freedom.
Part IV: Evidence- gather the textual evidence from your chosen source that will be used in your essay. Be sure to properly cite using parenthetical citations.
Appeals Evidence
“The brave men, living and dead, who struggled here, have consecrated it far above our poor power to add or detract.” Lincoln used this sentence to arouse the audience's emotions. He expressed his respect for the soldiers and made the audience realize that what they did was very great, thus leading to the concept of freedom that he wanted to convey next, which resonated with people more.
Style Evidence
"We cannot dedicate-we cannot consecrate-we cannot hallow this ground." Lincoln emphasizes the need for the living to honor and remember the soldiers who gave their lives for their country. This strengthens the power of the words, formalizes the speech, and gives the audience a deeper appreciation for the nobility of the soldiers and the significance of their sacrifice to America.
Device Evidence
“That we here highly resolve that these dead shall not have died in vain; that this nation shall have a new birth of freedom; and that this government of the people, by the people, for the people, shall not perish from the earth.” Lincoln emphasized the need for people to draw strength from those sacrificed soldiers and to support the America for which they died by using repetition of “that”. It engraves these important ideas in the minds of the audience. To inspire people to continue to work to ensure America's freedom and democracy.
根据这个文件,结合论文的原材料:“The Gettysburg Address” delivered by Abraham Lincoln
President Abraham Lincoln gave his most famous speech, the Gettysburg Address, on November
19, 1863. At that time, the U.S. was in the middle of the Civil War. Lincoln gave the speech at
the dedication of a cemetery for the soldiers who had died during the Battle of Gettysburg.
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Four score and seven years ago our fathers brought forth, upon this continent, a new nation,
conceived in Liberty, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.
Now we are engaged in a great civil war, testing whether that nation, or any nation, so conceived,
and so dedicated, can long endure. We are met on a great battlefield of that war. We are now have
come to dedicate a portion of it as the a final resting place of for those who here gave their lives
that that nation might live. It is altogether fitting and proper that we should do this.
But in a larger sense we can not dedicate—we can not consecrate—we can not hallow this
ground. The brave men, living and dead, who struggled here, have consecrated it far above our
poor power to add or detract. The world will little note, nor long remember, what we say here,
but can never forget what they did here. It is for us, the living, rather to be dedicated here to the
unfinished work which they have, thus far, so nobly carried on. It is rather for us to be here
dedicated to the great task remaining before us—that from these honored dead we take increased
devotion to the that cause for which they here gave gave the last full measure of devotion—that
we here highly resolve that these dead shall not have died in vain; that this nation shall have a
new birth of freedom; and that this government of the people, by the people, for the people, shall
not perish from the earth.
还有这个是我老师给我文件的评语:In your current thesis, the only rhetorical strategy mentioned is pathos; however, you will mention others as stated on this document. You will need to mention them, or do not mention any of them.
Also, thesis is a bit wordy. Please revise and resubmit.
写一个1000word的论文